jueves, 20 de agosto de 2009

advantages v/s disadvantages about to live in the town or city!

The people is always thinking about to live in other different place where we live without doubts the places expected are the town and the country because they are 2 places very different and each one have a lot advantages and disadvantages.

Firstly, the town has many places where the people can work and to receive a amount of money that maybe the person can't obtain in the country because the country doesn't have places where the people can work or it jobs are low-paid for that reason the people have to move the town.
the town has a lot of places where you can entertaining and enjoy the life in the town moreover you can have oportunities for to study and to open new doors. Also the town has more hospital where you can have easy access to it. The problem is the increase of people and the life is hard each day in consequences the relation between people is indifferent and competitive. Also the town has a lot of dangers the people here can't live in peace all people feel stress, angry and tired. Despite the town has comforts some people don't feel comfortable in this environment.
the relation between people affect a lot in the life of them for that the enviroment where you live must be comfortable.

In conclusion I prefer the country because in this place your family will live with the most whole calmly and I consider it is important I don't care the technologies that can have the town or some beneficits. Whereas in the country the life is paeaceful in all field the realtion with people is more friendly

1 comentario:

  1. Well done! You have organized your essay relatively well. There are some parts that I find a bit confusing. For example, I'm not sure if you are comparing life in the city, town or countryside. In your introduction you mention that the city and town are very different, then you clearly explain the advantages and disadvantages of them. In the end you conclude that you prefer the country, but you hadn't mentioned it previously.

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